What is Love?
Is it the warm feeling I get
when your skin touches mine?
Or is it the emptiness I feel
when you are no longer there?
What is Love? Is it the warm feeling I get when your skin touches mine? Or is it the emptiness I feel when you are no longer there? |
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As short as that was, I thought it was beautiful.
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One--it's simple yet loaded with emotion, feeling, and meaning
Two--the spacing and how it flows. For such a short poem, you did a fantastic job.
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Very well done. Simple and full of emotion.
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