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all of me, none of you by =VertigoArt:iconVertigoArt:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Experimental > Other


Pouring out
   all of me
in
  to
    you

Holding nothing back
I give my all

Only to be told to turn away

You have no interest
You have no desire
         to be with me

So here I am
     stuck

As your friend.
©2009 =VertigoArt
:iconvertigoart:

Author's Comments

Just something quick and dirty, a fleeting feeling.



This is dedicated to me good friend *Caillile

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Mood: Wow! ~EternalSolaceEssence Feb 11, 2009, 5:05:09 PM
awww. makes for a sad poem, but i like it much. good job! ;)

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..."My heart...insides...outside...want you...to... devour you. When this is all over...remember me... for eternity?"

..."he devoured my soul; thought it would be easier, something else; now vulnerable my soul bleeds: his name carved into me..."
:iconblueskye27:
*Blueskye27 Feb 11, 2009, 5:25:29 PM
That's a hard place to be. :(
:iconcaroncecilia:
=CaronCecilia Feb 11, 2009, 5:34:28 PM
heart-strumming.......played mine like an electric bass..... :)

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~Those talked over oft times make the best writers.
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yeah, I'm one of those "I really like this, good job!" critics. So sue me...
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=VertigoArt Feb 11, 2009, 7:00:34 PM
Thank you. :)

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Shameless Plug

You may purchase my new book,

Poetic Visions of an Uncut Mind

at this address: [link]
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=VertigoArt Feb 11, 2009, 7:01:56 PM
Yes it is.
Thank you, Cindy.
:hug:

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Shameless Plug

You may purchase my new book,

Poetic Visions of an Uncut Mind

at this address: [link]
:iconvertigoart:
=VertigoArt Feb 11, 2009, 7:02:28 PM
That much good rhythm?

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Shameless Plug

You may purchase my new book,

Poetic Visions of an Uncut Mind

at this address: [link]
:iconcaroncecilia:
=CaronCecilia Feb 11, 2009, 7:04:18 PM
that much!! :)

:dance:

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~Those talked over oft times make the best writers.
---
yeah, I'm one of those "I really like this, good job!" critics. So sue me...
---

I support: =DailyLitDeviations *100ThemesChallenge ~Prompt-A-Day ~CollabLit
:iconvertigoart:
=VertigoArt Feb 11, 2009, 7:06:27 PM
:iconjoyplz:

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Shameless Plug

You may purchase my new book,

Poetic Visions of an Uncut Mind

at this address: [link]
:iconhellfaust84:
~HellFaust84 Feb 11, 2009, 9:50:05 PM
that's a painful place to be

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:blackrose: Am I a freak just because I have no heart? :blackrose:
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