I can still feel your arms
wrapped around my body;
my flesh still burns from your touch.
I can still see your eyes
staring into mine;
searching my soul for answers.
I can still feel your lips,
gently pressed to my ear,
whispering words I never wanted to hear.
and I can still hear those words
telling me we’re through
as you walk away
leaving me vacant
and empty.
alone, holding my broken heart
with no way to fix it
because part of it still lies within you.
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staring into mine; searching my soul for answers." Strong image in my head with that... -- War & Tyrany are for Loosers...    Thank you very much...
-- Check out *DailyLitDeviations a group dedicated to bring literary art to the forefront of our community. A.B.C ~ Always Be Creating Poetic Visions of an Uncut Mind: [link]  I absolutely love this, Will. I think that this one spoke of great emotions. That's what makes this poem so special to me. This is so good to me.
-- Blackbird singing in the dead of night. My youtube [link] Thank you so much.
I also just found out you can upload audio files here. I uploaded the audio version of Hidden Pleasures. Thought you might find that interesting. -- Check out *DailyLitDeviations a group dedicated to bring literary art to the forefront of our community. A.B.C ~ Always Be Creating Poetic Visions of an Uncut Mind: [link]  Really beautifully written, the pain of it comes through, so palpable. You manage to turn something so difficult and sad into an amazing portrait.
-- Take a look and enter the "Poetry Screams Prompt Contest" [link] ----- Poetry Admin for *DailyLitDeviations Thank you very much... and thank you for the
 -- Check out *DailyLitDeviations a group dedicated to bring literary art to the forefront of our community. A.B.C ~ Always Be Creating Poetic Visions of an Uncut Mind: [link] Welcome. Yeah, I listened to it. The audio was very good.
-- Blackbird singing in the dead of night. My youtube [link]  so, so good, sweets....love it....heartbreaking...
-- ~Those talked over oft times make the best writers. --- yeah, I'm one of those "I really like this, good job!" critics. So sue me... --- I support: =DailyLitDeviations *100ThemesChallenge ~Prompt-A-Day ~CollabLit Thank you again.
-- Check out *DailyLitDeviations a group dedicated to bring literary art to the forefront of our community. A.B.C ~ Always Be Creating Poetic Visions of an Uncut Mind: [link] |
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